Manas Persuasive Writing Group 3

Hi Mum , I think I should go to survivor waima forest. Who is going to survivor? Lana, Peter , Mr Pricket , Karen Who wants me to go to survivor? Lana Giesbers It will be fun because I am cooking my own food , making my own tent. I will be cooking my own breakfast like: baked beans. First I need to make a fire then put my pot on the fire. Third, Open a can of baked beans Then put it in the pot until it is warm making my own lunch and dinner. It would be a good experience of learning how to survive.

Kiwi bird project work

This is my work that I presented to the class for laura to see my presentation

Now you see it now you dont

I have learned to use show not tell in my narrtive called the hike talking about our cousins in our story.

Manas Copy Of Cold Task Narrative

Yesterday I went to whangarei to go the movies to watch Bad Guys and Sonic 2 They were both funny to watch first we watched Bad Guys Then we watched Sonic 2 Then we went to kmart to buy stationary and to get school clothes for on monday like jeans school socks school shoes for winter This was a fun day and night for me and my whanau Then we went to pak & save to get school lunch Then we wnet to get KFC for our dinner Then finally we went home and went to bed We had drinks the movies like coca cola L&P Appleblack currant. In class we do Cold Task to find out what we already know.Our cold task was on narrative writing This snap shot of what I can do in 30 mins by myself what would I like to improve on my paragraphs in writng my narrative.

How to teach people to forgive

In class our topic is forgiveness.We are learning why os it important.We read about Ngakuku and how forgiveness stopped ongoing war Here is my reading response And we are learning to help people do their mahi and to stay on task on your school work and to help your friends and mates.

Being Lost in Waikato Forest

In class We are reading hatchet We are learning to summrise our recounts in our writing We are learning to use and understand words we dont know you ask a teacher or a year 8 to help you do the words you dont know You can ask your mates or your friends to spell words you dont know.

Manas Novel Response

Introduction:Book name:Hatchet novel response Mana 

In class I have being reading a book hatchet The author is Gary Paulsen The Text Type is Fiction 

In the story brian eats all the berries and he got sick on the bush berries in the forest then he crashed. That's how he got in the forest by crashing in the bush. He found fish in the lake He got he fish out with his bare hands

Main event 1

It was a freezing night in hatchet he made a fire for himself so he does not get freezing cold He got wood to make his fire shelter he found foolish birds  

 Main event 2 He was exhausted , hungry , hurting but he had something close to a place to live again , a place to be. 

Ending I think reading is finding out that he had wood to make the hot fire and that he found the foolish birds fooling around.