Now you see it now you dont

I have learned to use show not tell in my narrtive called the hike talking about our cousins in our story.

Manas Copy Of Cold Task Narrative

Yesterday I went to whangarei to go the movies to watch Bad Guys and Sonic 2 They were both funny to watch first we watched Bad Guys Then we watched Sonic 2 Then we went to kmart to buy stationary and to get school clothes for on monday like jeans school socks school shoes for winter This was a fun day and night for me and my whanau Then we went to pak & save to get school lunch Then we wnet to get KFC for our dinner Then finally we went home and went to bed We had drinks the movies like coca cola L&P Appleblack currant. In class we do Cold Task to find out what we already know.Our cold task was on narrative writing This snap shot of what I can do in 30 mins by myself what would I like to improve on my paragraphs in writng my narrative.

How to teach people to forgive

In class our topic is forgiveness.We are learning why os it important.We read about Ngakuku and how forgiveness stopped ongoing war Here is my reading response And we are learning to help people do their mahi and to stay on task on your school work and to help your friends and mates.